Friday, September 11, 2009

The Lounge and the steady beat

The steady beat of the base guitar can be heard through the hazy smoke. Making our way to the back of the lounge, drinks in hand, we sat on a leather couch. The strobe lights grazing over us intermittently. I can feel the thump of the music in my chest and your hand on my thigh, sliding under my dress. Further up your hand travels, finding the inside of my thighs slick with anticipation.

18 comments:

  1. Damn you. :) Everytime I read your stuff I get all sexual. I don't have time for this. :)

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  2. lets head for the couch.. Im really keen on Italian.. :)

    And Monday will be stunning...
    "Lets do Italian..."

    Please pop me a mail, I dont have your address... would like to send you an invite! Have a great weekend...

    thelevistore@gmail.com

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  3. Gray....

    I just adore you, here I am not feeling the least bit attractive...and now I'm looking for music with a steady bass line.
    Thanks you so much!

    mouse

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  4. like the others, now I only want to be making out with some guy in the VIP section of some club... sigh, the good old days...

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  5. Ooooh!! You make me need a night out with my husband!! Sounds wonderful already!!

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  6. La Roo: I'm so not sorry.;)

    The Levi Store: The couch it is!

    mouse: You are one of the most attractive people I read on a daily basis. Never forget that!

    Topaz: You and me both.;)

    Sexy PTA Mom: Only if you blog about it for the rest of us..;)

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  7. There is some place out there you can still smoke??? Sign me up!

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  8. What a great way to enjoy some drinks and some tunes!!

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  9. Something about getting lost in a loud bass line that hooks me every time...

    xx

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  10. you have captured that primitive sexual urgency that the deep throb of a bass brings out.

    dam, you have me trapped in another club with you, last time i was dancing, now im sitting throbbing to the music.

    as always excellent writing.

    finbar

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  11. You always leave me with sweet thoughts.

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  12. Sounds like one interesting beat...

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  13. another wonderful one. i just love to read what you write, i think you could write a biography of a rock I'd still love it.

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  14. On one of the poem sites I frequent, they have a weekly theme. Last week theme was anticipation, this fits extremely well... Short and erotic...

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  15. you have a way of expressing yourself in an amazing way, with very few words... I enjoy visitin here..

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  16. Red: I know right?!

    Black Pearl: Definitely always a good time!

    Southerngirl: I get lost in music so easily.:)

    Finbar: You are exactly where I want you to be.;)

    Playfully Yours: Awee I am happy to do so!

    Buddha: Wanna go listen to some music?

    Sqweakygurl: *blushes* awee you are so sweet!

    1manview: Thank you so much!

    The Levi Store: I enjoy having you here!

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  17. I agree with Levi, very few words but an amazing way with them. I like your style. Brevity, yet sexy and so much left to the imagination.

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  18. Dewey's System: Awee you guys are so great!! Definitely makes it worth writing.:)

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