The Contest will run until Friday Morning!
The Rules:
1) Read the submitted piece of erotica.
2) Leave a comment as to your guess who wrote it.
It was written by one of the 55 readers under the Stalker section.
3) Prize: Your choice: A) a written piece on your choice of topics or B) A collaborated piece
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The pain of bliss, finally.
Must not lose consciousness...
Ropes.
The smell of me.
Restrained.
Seeing blackness...
Candles.
I need to review what has happened to me...4 hours ago...stay awake...
There was a letter waiting for me on the doorstep when I came home from work. I looked around, not seeing anyone nearby. I picked up the letter and it read, "You will take a shower now and you will dress appropriately for me. Be at my house no later than 6 pm. Nic." I checked my pager for time and I saw that I would have 35 minutes to get showered, dressed, and drive to her house 30 minutes away. Shit.
I rushed through the shower, washed all the important parts, and I put on an outfit which was always a favorite of Nic's - dark dress socks, red boxer briefs, blue dress shirt, and grey slacks. No belt, no. Fuck it. I got my brown loafers and headed out to my car. The drive was non-existent in my memory bank - all I thought about was what we would do that night. I pulled into her driveway and I looked at the clock - 6:01 pm. Shit. Shit.
I made sure to smooth out my outfit before ringing the doorbell. No answer. I rang again. Nothing. I tested the doorknob and the door opened. I let myself in, stepped into the foyer, and closed the door, in which the slight darkness enveloped me. I stood there, waiting for my eyes to adjust while still unsure of what to do...I decided to walk into her kitchen. Nobody in there. Not even in the TV room or anywhere else. I suspected that I was supposed to go to the basement.
When I got to the bottom of the stairs, I smelled the candles before I saw them. Shit. Shit. Shit. That meant she wanted to be in control and I would be her bitch. No, no...not that day...I was feeling too defiant...and she loved it when I am defiant. She came into my view and I saw that she was wearing her business attire. She told me to come to her and unzip her skirt. I unzipped her skirt and started to take it down, but she slapped me across the face and said "I did not give you permission to do anything else yet!"
I glared at her and that excited her - my mistake. She told me to unbutton her shirt and I unbuttoned the 1st button and was about to do the 2nd one but I got another hard slap. "Do it slowly!" she hissed at me. I tried again and got slapped again. "Slower, bitch!" I did it ever so slowly and I could see while unbuttoning that she had her dominatrix outfit on. Fuck.
She stepped away from her outer outfit and said "You know what to do." I knelt before her and I tried to lick her leg, but she kneed me in the chest hard enough to send me backwards. I looked up at her and she said "No, no! I want you to put the harness on...now!" and pointed at it. It was a simple harness with loops at strategic points. I stood up and unbuttoned my shirt.
The sting in my leg registered in my head before I knew it. My leg jumped in response to the sting. Crack! Another bite of the whip, this time on my ass but too high up. I tried not to grunt, but that HURT from being too high up on my ass. She snarled at me, "Slowly, I want to see every second of you undressing." I complied, taking my sweet time with my clothes. I put on the harness slowly, not in the mood to feel the wrath of her weapon.
She walked over to me and put the blindfold on me so I could not see what she was doing. I felt a tug somewhere on my harness...and another...and another... Then I felt the top part of the harness go stiff and stay that way. I felt her put wrist restraints on me and then attached those restraints to my harness. Next came the leg restraints and then my legs were forced apart. Then I felt my hips and legs being pulled up and I realized that I was going to be suspended in the air. Helpless. Totally at her mercy.
I remembered the shock of seeing 2 naked ladies after my blindfold was removed. Goddamn it, I could not cover myself up even if I wanted to and I knew they knew that. I got hard. So hard that it actually hurt. I noticed that I was about 3 feet above the ground. I found out why when Nic positioned her pussy above my face and the new woman knelt between my legs. Perfect height.
I went to work on Nic's pussy, knowing exactly what she loved to have done to her...but the woman was GOOD with her mouth...oh, fuck me...fuck me...fuck me! I did all I could to focus on Nic...and the woman seemed to KNOW when I was about to come because she would back off and let me calm down. Shitfuckyoubitchfuck! Nic twisted my nipples hard whenever she was about to come - her favorite tactic to get me to back off but fuck no...I was being defiant. Nic suddenly dismounted my face and I saw another pussy coming down on my face.
I paid attention to how this woman would respond to each technique, filing each positive response away to memory...so I could pile everything on and overwhelm the magnificent cocksucker at once. After about 15 minutes of exploring her pussy, her knees started to buckle and she started to grind into my mouth so aggressively that I feared I would not be able to breathe again so I worked harder to make her climax. I emptied my memory bank to make her come NOWWWWW.
She quaked and quivered for what seemed an eternity before she finally fell away from me. I realized that Nic had been doing the same thing to me what that woman had done to me earlier...bringing me to the brink, backing off, and repeating. I started grunting and vocalizing louder and louder so she stood up and impaled herself on my very sensitive cock...hard. Goddamn, she was very wet and that felt GOOD! She grinded away at my cock, while leaning over to apply pressure to her clit during the motion. I said, "I don't want you to stop because I will fucking explode." She didn't say anything and she started grinding harder and faster.
AAHAHHAGH...grunt...uhhhgrRR...rrr...
The pain of bliss, finally.
Must not lose consciousness...
Ropes.
The smell of me.
Restrained.
Seeing blackness...
Candles.
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Good luck!!
Must not lose consciousness...
Ropes.
The smell of me.
Restrained.
Seeing blackness...
Candles.
I need to review what has happened to me...4 hours ago...stay awake...
There was a letter waiting for me on the doorstep when I came home from work. I looked around, not seeing anyone nearby. I picked up the letter and it read, "You will take a shower now and you will dress appropriately for me. Be at my house no later than 6 pm. Nic." I checked my pager for time and I saw that I would have 35 minutes to get showered, dressed, and drive to her house 30 minutes away. Shit.
I rushed through the shower, washed all the important parts, and I put on an outfit which was always a favorite of Nic's - dark dress socks, red boxer briefs, blue dress shirt, and grey slacks. No belt, no. Fuck it. I got my brown loafers and headed out to my car. The drive was non-existent in my memory bank - all I thought about was what we would do that night. I pulled into her driveway and I looked at the clock - 6:01 pm. Shit. Shit.
I made sure to smooth out my outfit before ringing the doorbell. No answer. I rang again. Nothing. I tested the doorknob and the door opened. I let myself in, stepped into the foyer, and closed the door, in which the slight darkness enveloped me. I stood there, waiting for my eyes to adjust while still unsure of what to do...I decided to walk into her kitchen. Nobody in there. Not even in the TV room or anywhere else. I suspected that I was supposed to go to the basement.
When I got to the bottom of the stairs, I smelled the candles before I saw them. Shit. Shit. Shit. That meant she wanted to be in control and I would be her bitch. No, no...not that day...I was feeling too defiant...and she loved it when I am defiant. She came into my view and I saw that she was wearing her business attire. She told me to come to her and unzip her skirt. I unzipped her skirt and started to take it down, but she slapped me across the face and said "I did not give you permission to do anything else yet!"
I glared at her and that excited her - my mistake. She told me to unbutton her shirt and I unbuttoned the 1st button and was about to do the 2nd one but I got another hard slap. "Do it slowly!" she hissed at me. I tried again and got slapped again. "Slower, bitch!" I did it ever so slowly and I could see while unbuttoning that she had her dominatrix outfit on. Fuck.
She stepped away from her outer outfit and said "You know what to do." I knelt before her and I tried to lick her leg, but she kneed me in the chest hard enough to send me backwards. I looked up at her and she said "No, no! I want you to put the harness on...now!" and pointed at it. It was a simple harness with loops at strategic points. I stood up and unbuttoned my shirt.
The sting in my leg registered in my head before I knew it. My leg jumped in response to the sting. Crack! Another bite of the whip, this time on my ass but too high up. I tried not to grunt, but that HURT from being too high up on my ass. She snarled at me, "Slowly, I want to see every second of you undressing." I complied, taking my sweet time with my clothes. I put on the harness slowly, not in the mood to feel the wrath of her weapon.
She walked over to me and put the blindfold on me so I could not see what she was doing. I felt a tug somewhere on my harness...and another...and another... Then I felt the top part of the harness go stiff and stay that way. I felt her put wrist restraints on me and then attached those restraints to my harness. Next came the leg restraints and then my legs were forced apart. Then I felt my hips and legs being pulled up and I realized that I was going to be suspended in the air. Helpless. Totally at her mercy.
I remembered the shock of seeing 2 naked ladies after my blindfold was removed. Goddamn it, I could not cover myself up even if I wanted to and I knew they knew that. I got hard. So hard that it actually hurt. I noticed that I was about 3 feet above the ground. I found out why when Nic positioned her pussy above my face and the new woman knelt between my legs. Perfect height.
I went to work on Nic's pussy, knowing exactly what she loved to have done to her...but the woman was GOOD with her mouth...oh, fuck me...fuck me...fuck me! I did all I could to focus on Nic...and the woman seemed to KNOW when I was about to come because she would back off and let me calm down. Shitfuckyoubitchfuck! Nic twisted my nipples hard whenever she was about to come - her favorite tactic to get me to back off but fuck no...I was being defiant. Nic suddenly dismounted my face and I saw another pussy coming down on my face.
I paid attention to how this woman would respond to each technique, filing each positive response away to memory...so I could pile everything on and overwhelm the magnificent cocksucker at once. After about 15 minutes of exploring her pussy, her knees started to buckle and she started to grind into my mouth so aggressively that I feared I would not be able to breathe again so I worked harder to make her climax. I emptied my memory bank to make her come NOWWWWW.
She quaked and quivered for what seemed an eternity before she finally fell away from me. I realized that Nic had been doing the same thing to me what that woman had done to me earlier...bringing me to the brink, backing off, and repeating. I started grunting and vocalizing louder and louder so she stood up and impaled herself on my very sensitive cock...hard. Goddamn, she was very wet and that felt GOOD! She grinded away at my cock, while leaning over to apply pressure to her clit during the motion. I said, "I don't want you to stop because I will fucking explode." She didn't say anything and she started grinding harder and faster.
AAHAHHAGH...grunt...uhhhgrRR...rrr...
The pain of bliss, finally.
Must not lose consciousness...
Ropes.
The smell of me.
Restrained.
Seeing blackness...
Candles.
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Good luck!!

I vote Finbar! What do
ReplyDeleteI win???
ohhh i'm afraid i don't know who wrote it, but i certainly did enjoy reading it though! :)
ReplyDelete55 stalkers, huh? 1 in 55 chances to get it right? Better odds than the lotto... LOL Maybe Mistress Bella?
ReplyDeleteI don't know, and don't care.
ReplyDeleteThat was just hot!!!
Kudos to whom ever wrote it, it was fantastic.
Ooooh! I'm a terrible guesser, but I loved the story!!
ReplyDeleteI Giveth not a damn. More please.
ReplyDeleteWas hot... that's all I know!
ReplyDeleteThat was incredibly HOT. I mean DAMN!!!!
ReplyDeleteIt sure was nice to hear all those comments about my erotica. :)
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