Wednesday, July 15, 2009

The Dance

I watched her on the dance floor, moving in time with the music. Her jeans riding low on her hips, her taunt stomach begging to be touched, her long dark hair flowing down her back. Just the sight of her was making me wet.

She caught my eye as I started to walk towards her. With a wink she was in front of me. Her arms draped over my shoulders as I placed my hands on her hips. Slowly our bodies began to moved closer. Sliding one hand up her back, wrapping it in her hair I pulled her head back, exposing her neck to my tongue. Feeling her body grinding into mine was driving me crazy.

"Your place or mine?" She asked.

Does it matter?
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22 comments:

  1. TallgrassJuly 15, 2009 at 8:36 AM

    So they kissed passionately and took it to the parking lot? Love your stuff.

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  2. TallgrassJuly 15, 2009 at 8:53 AM

    Thanks for sharing. Yes, that would be a great way to carry the story on. Shoot me an email at ttallgrass@yahoo.com .

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  3. Complicated KittenJuly 15, 2009 at 9:29 AM

    HOT! Nope, it doesn't matter... More please!!

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  4. HeffJuly 15, 2009 at 9:40 AM

    tease.

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  5. TopazJuly 15, 2009 at 9:58 AM

    Tease? Yes, but isn't that what is such a turn on?
    Great job - I love it!

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  6. Nolens VolensJuly 15, 2009 at 10:10 AM

    No. ;)

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  7. 13messagesJuly 15, 2009 at 10:14 AM

    Another hypnotic and beautiful post. I love it.

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  8. EmmaJuly 15, 2009 at 10:22 AM

    I wish that I could capture a scene as well as you do in so few words. I'm always so completely drawn in by your writing.

    ~ E ~

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  9. Aleesuhn_MuhreeJuly 15, 2009 at 10:28 AM

    Love it :) Great job, Gray!

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  10. CandeJuly 15, 2009 at 10:29 AM

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=la42R5MX_PE

    forgot to leave the link... must have been distracted by something... what was it?? oh... yeah.... plant's stomach. mmmmm

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  11. CandeJuly 15, 2009 at 10:29 AM

    Here's what I was watching yesterday. And somehow your story brought it right back to mind. Something about the jeans, low, taught stomach... oooh Plant is hot in that vid!!!

    Haha sorry, your stories are always so vivid!

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  12. GrayJuly 15, 2009 at 12:09 PM

    Tallgrass: ;)

    Complicated Kitten: Working on it! hehehe

    Heff: Isn't that the point?

    Topaz: Thank you so much!

    Nolen: You would say that. Hahah

    13Messages: Awee thank you

    Emma: I think you write so much better. I honestly do.

    Aleesuhn: Thank you hun!

    Cande: You are so funny girl!

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  13. Sir JJuly 15, 2009 at 12:54 PM

    I think the key to your writing is you paint such a vivid picture with so few words that each reader fills in the blanks in the picture making it seem as it it was written just for them.

    Well done, in my own picture the me talking is blonde and my h and I am watching from a table just off the floor.

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  14. Sir JJuly 15, 2009 at 2:29 PM

    If you are willing I would like to have a private conversation please email me.

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  15. mouseJuly 15, 2009 at 3:27 PM

    Oh wow...oh my. More, more more...

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  16. southerngirlJuly 15, 2009 at 8:04 PM

    Love your vignettes baby... so much left for the imaginations!! Wonderful!

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  17. Lost KittenJuly 15, 2009 at 8:17 PM

    Whew... Can i borrow your mind for the evening??

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  18. GrayJuly 15, 2009 at 10:28 PM

    Sir J: =)

    Mouse: You got it!

    Southerngirl: Thank you so much

    Lost Kitten: Anytime you want!

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  19. La RooJuly 15, 2009 at 10:38 PM

    Gray,
    you just put me right there in the moment.

    I have a question.Have you done a Beautiful Agony? Just asking because of the banner at the top of your post.
    I did a Ishotmyself last November. Thinking about doing another sometime soon.

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  20. My expressions LIVEJuly 16, 2009 at 8:13 AM

    Nicely written.....reminded me of some memories...;)

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  21. WilJuly 16, 2009 at 5:02 PM

    How in the hell did I miss this one!?

    Wil Harrison.com

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  22. vixen kittenJuly 18, 2009 at 5:54 PM

    Damn. This is stunning.

    xoxo
    ~vk~

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